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 - One example of political correctness backfiring is when "sensitive" material is removed from coursework to avoid upsetting students. 
 - This is shown with affirmative action causing problems and not having the intended affect
 - We want to avoid "being gored on either horn"
-- Enforcing political correctness can lead to widespread "preference falsification", in which what people believe in private is detached from what is spoken in public
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+- Enforcing political correctness can lead to widespread "preference falsification", in which what people believe in private is detached from what is spoken in public
+- "preference falsification" can lead to polarization.
+- In the example of social justice, many attribute poor social outcomes to factors *external* to the person, because then you can avoid directly blaming the person, an inherently uncomfortable discussion. Regardless of how correct the end result is, this tendency is still present. 
+- In promoting norms intended to benefit marginalized groups, we both help and hurt them
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